I just want to keep looking at you
What have you done to me, baby?
Your smile quenches my inner thirst
The spark in your eye lights up my being
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This is gorgeous TO, the imagery is sublime.... Sigh! what a stunning poem! HG: -) xx
Inside the bubble of bliss. euphoric yet afraid, the promise of the kiss, but what price might be payed? Lovely TO Danny
what a romantic poem...i loved it..i liked the last two lines..this poem deserves a super 10.
Ah but the dream could never end........ I like this for so many reasons....the style is structured well... it flows with an atmosphere of true delight... and the end is perfected puchlined..... top grades on this one......