(a) 47 (Love/Passion) Beware, My Love... Comments

electric dreams........loved it..............

This one's very skillful in rhyme and meter, as well as in thematic development and substance. I suspect you didn't start writing yesterday! I may be too fastidious, but I don't get the 'beware' in the very last stanza. (though you may have reasons, and I should perhaps realize them. Because we all fear the lack of conflict and limitation?)

Oooooohhhhhh! There's electricity in these (perfectly expressed) words.... t x

Beautifully expressed piece TO. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, a clever write and excellently thought out. Applause! ! ! ! ! ! Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

Lots of depth to this work, T.O.>>>TIGHT, CRISP STRYCTURING HAS BEEN A COMMONPLACE FOR YOUR ARTISTRY & THIS PIECE IS OF NO EXCEPTION! sOLID wORK, MY DEAR... fRANK

Love the intensity of this poem TO, the way you compare the power of love to the forces of nature. Stunning. Justine

A wonderful reminder of the awsome power, which demands respect but can bring such rewards. Thanks for this. Danny