(a) 41 (Love/Passion) My Heart Comments

My Response TO: My Heart I was tapping on my angst memories in vain; Oh! Her senses awakened & heart mounted! I mellifluously murmured in mislaid thoughts; I wonder how her forlorn heart had the stir! I had truly stubbed the voices of my bygone; I am surprised, how my knife stabbed a heart. She now remains confused between thresholds; Combating her felon heart with a plea and cry! Confused remains her self, wanting just to be; And, believing in the rebirth of my expired soul!

One could never tier of this well construted read.....

Ummm, this isn't my personal best from your poems, but i love the concept and the structure. Preets

This pulls the reader in and kept up the flow throughout Love duncan X

I love the 'three' line stanzas, very cleverly written. Delightful to peruse. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

this is really good TO...one of your best i should say...well written and has a great flow...love...nalini

A very well written poem.................

'My heart is on lease' - what an utterly superb way of putting this. Your heart is a big and welcoming and deserving one, methinks. Finely penned. t x