Tuesday, December 26, 2006

(a) 39 (Love/Passion) Dream Blessings Comments

Rating: 5.0

Last night I dreamt of you
Continuing what we couldnt complete
Our salivas intermingling
Lips travelling from head to feet
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Jim Foulk 10 February 2007

a very beautiful piece of poetry.

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Catastrophe King 01 January 2007

Standing on the edge of the balcony of the famous Qutub Minar; I looked out for you...... for an amzing poetess is afraid to come-out in front and claim the trophies and accolades that await her...... truly sensous, exotic and hmmmmmmmmm.. what a welcome treat for me! hahahaha

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 26 December 2006

You say Mmmmm.....I say Hmmmmmm! lol! T.O.>>>You do own the passionate skills to Pen the sensual....Afine job, here, as per usual....striking pictorial & well constructed crafting... ~ f.j.r. ~

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Diane Violet 26 December 2006

A deep passion felt in this piece, wonderfully written. All the best, Diane

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Geoff Warden 26 December 2006

The passion in this piece flows well o'er the falls of poetic imagery, Well delivered...TO

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Patricia Gale 26 December 2006

A very passionate piece, the body and the souls unite then blessed by angels, what could be better!

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R H 26 December 2006

A dreamy picture of love and longing...beautifully crafted. Justine

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