I wish I was the morning wind
Gently brushing against your skin
I wish I was a ray of sunlight
...
Read full text
There is so much in this, so much that lifts us up, I wish I was the fragrance In the garden of love where you were a prince Such amazing words Love duncan X
GREAT OPENING VERSE...CAPTURES THE READER & IMMEDIATELY ENSCONCES THEM IN WHATS TO FOLLOW...CAN'T CALL IT A TEASE, AS IT ONLY GETS BETTER, BUT THATS STILL WHAT IT'S CALLED & AS A COMPLIMENT IN TRUE! YOU ARE, I SEE IN THE ELITE TOP 500 POETS LIST...CONGRATS...& WELL DESERVED, MY DEAR.'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''F. j. R.
Good Morning, T.O.! What a lovely dessert to follow my morning TEA! Sweetly sprinkled spiritual and blessed with a touch of the romantic, simply a delightful write! Blessings, Debora
My Response TO: I WISH I am alive, for you are the blowing wind; Caressing my weathered skin your way! I am alive, for you are the ray of sun; That warms my quilt in darkness, too! I am alive, for you are that dropp of wine; This mixed my body and did enshrine! I am alive, for you are the fragrance; That spread an aura of love into my soul! I am alive; for you are the lovely spring; That has blossomed into my lonely life! I am alive; for you are the breath - I breathe I am alive; I am alive; I am alive; I am alive!