Friday, December 8, 2006

(a) 37 (Love/Passion) I Wish Comments

Rating: 3.5

I wish I was the morning wind
Gently brushing against your skin

I wish I was a ray of sunlight
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
COMMENTS
Catastrophe King 10 September 2007

My Response TO: I WISH I am alive, for you are the blowing wind; Caressing my weathered skin your way! I am alive, for you are the ray of sun; That warms my quilt in darkness, too! I am alive, for you are that dropp of wine; This mixed my body and did enshrine! I am alive, for you are the fragrance; That spread an aura of love into my soul! I am alive; for you are the lovely spring; That has blossomed into my lonely life! I am alive; for you are the breath - I breathe I am alive; I am alive; I am alive; I am alive!

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Eila Mahima Jaipaul 10 December 2006

beautiful wishes, beautiful poem.. -Eila

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Duncan Wyllie 10 December 2006

There is so much in this, so much that lifts us up, I wish I was the fragrance In the garden of love where you were a prince Such amazing words Love duncan X

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 08 December 2006

GREAT OPENING VERSE...CAPTURES THE READER & IMMEDIATELY ENSCONCES THEM IN WHATS TO FOLLOW...CAN'T CALL IT A TEASE, AS IT ONLY GETS BETTER, BUT THATS STILL WHAT IT'S CALLED & AS A COMPLIMENT IN TRUE! YOU ARE, I SEE IN THE ELITE TOP 500 POETS LIST...CONGRATS...& WELL DESERVED, MY DEAR.'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''F. j. R.

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Asma Bahrainwala 08 December 2006

a nice, romantic poem... lovely images here... Asma...

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Debora Short 08 December 2006

Good Morning, T.O.! What a lovely dessert to follow my morning TEA! Sweetly sprinkled spiritual and blessed with a touch of the romantic, simply a delightful write! Blessings, Debora

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