You are like the mountain of ice
And am I the summer?
Thawing you from your stony guise
The water now trickling in the river
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Slices of romance & the chimerical....Well crafted work, T.O., as always... FJR
You describe, perfectly and memorably, a feeling I know, or knew. This is a piece that hit the spot. t x
And it's a great longing for melting loves really praiseworthy Tranquil.
You are the writer, bright! And, I am the talent-tied! You compose without fear; and I composed to get the sneer! With your warmth, you thawed Yet, I am stony and I flawed! You quiver with my concern; I am winter but see how I burn! You are the writer, bright! And, I am the talent-tied! I am happy you still compose in style!
Wow.....you seace to amaze me with such passionate writes that bring to the forfront an innate need, and yet the every importance of nuturing such need.... very well done..................