Sunday, December 17, 2006

(a) 34 (Love/Passion) The Melting Ice Comments

Rating: 5.0

You are like the mountain of ice
And am I the summer?
Thawing you from your stony guise
The water now trickling in the river
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Geoff Warden 26 December 2006

Wow.....you seace to amaze me with such passionate writes that bring to the forfront an innate need, and yet the every importance of nuturing such need.... very well done..................

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 17 December 2006

Slices of romance & the chimerical....Well crafted work, T.O., as always... FJR

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You describe, perfectly and memorably, a feeling I know, or knew. This is a piece that hit the spot. t x

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Nimal Dunuhinga 17 December 2006

And it's a great longing for melting loves really praiseworthy Tranquil.

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Catastrophe King 17 December 2006

You are the writer, bright! And, I am the talent-tied! You compose without fear; and I composed to get the sneer! With your warmth, you thawed Yet, I am stony and I flawed! You quiver with my concern; I am winter but see how I burn! You are the writer, bright! And, I am the talent-tied! I am happy you still compose in style!

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