(a) 33 (Love/Passion) An Eternal Fluoresce Comments

My Response TO: An Eternal Fluoresce! I tried to delve into your mind, whodunit; But, my gentle hands cannot swirl like it! Your soul’s clandestine, yet I just disrobe; And, I sap from a tree in the Godly abode! In every stratum; I had myself exposed; Yet, you thought my splendor is imposed! You wish, I rise and entangle our specters; But, I fail to blend my vigor in your stars! I am soundless. Yet on music, I am drunk! Yes, I gyrate! But, flutes drive me to funk. I am the dark smog that obscures the sun; And, the stars just quiver when I do burn! I would not terminate my path to perpetuity; You move ahead. I weakened my luminosity!

Then my love, we will cease to be Moving away towards infinity Finally the doors will open for us Our light shall always fluoresce This is very enjoyable to read, well done again T.O. Love duncan X

Your composition is so honest and touching.... full of emotional bondings! I thought of a Response Poem and posted it.... that ai'nt as good as yours! Truly.

Very invigerated versage, flows like the waters of an inner spring, well done T.O.

Enegized & inveterating work, young lady...Smooth, clarion rhythm & structure prevails here, as always...SoLid craftsmanship, T.O. F.J.R.