(a) 30 (Love/Passion) I Dont Want To Close My Eyes Comments

Tranquil I love when I can read a poem that makes me wish I wrote it...this is such a beautiful poem and Yes I wish I had penned this piece because it is brilliant... The imagery is amazing and the feelings you shared so freely and easily poured onto the screen and made this reader feel the passion...and based on your other comments I am not the only one who felt the heartbeat and passion of the poem! Beautiful.Simply Beautiful! ! ten out of 10! I added it to my favorites as well. Thanx for sharing TO......................... =Shelley=

You have a way of pulling the reader into your emotion. Your imagery is outstanding and your rhyme is original and superb. Another great read. Thank you for sharing.: o) bobbie

Even i don't want to close my eyes, how will I read your lovely poems. This one's beautiful, lovely rhymes too. Preets

Soothing, serene, engaging and powerful through that... and yes... yes. We know that feeling - those of us who are deeply lucky. A captivating write, TO. t x

Transcendence suberb! Blessings ~ Debora

a simp; e yet electrifying piece......I shall sing ten

You can sing with your eye's closed? nice, very nice poem Tran dave xxx

Really lovely, if I close my eyes I can imagine the scene well written Love L xx

REFRESHING, MELODIOUS PIECE...I LIKE THIS, T.O.>>>YOUR PASSION FOR THE PEN IS ALWAYS EVERSO PRESENT INTHE QUALITY OF YOUR FINISHED PRODUCT''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR