Wednesday, February 28, 2007

(a) 29 (Love/Passion) I Am The Silly Heart That You Stole Comments

Rating: 2.9

I am the warp, you are the weft
I am the ground, you are the step

I am the lantern, you are the light
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Linda Ori 28 February 2007

Neat little package, here, TO. I like the content and the connectedness of two entities. You've done this beautifully and profoundly. Linda

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Catastrophe King 28 February 2007

Changes and variations in your style is noticeable. A good work, indeed! I see you are going the rhyming way!

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