Saturday, February 9, 2008

A 23) Nipping The Buds Of Love Comments

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Full of optimism
I sow seeds in the garden that is my heart
The roots take hold
Early signs are good as strong fresh shoots grow
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Bill Smith
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Malini Kadir 03 April 2008

Sad but beautiful poem......touched my heart...thanks for sharing

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Bob Oldfield 22 February 2008

Yes indeed, the struggle between heart and mind - the eternal war! I loved this strangely sad poem - how true it probably is to many of us.

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Michelle Evans 21 February 2008

That's sad but beautiful. Another lovely poem. Michelle

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Nomi Mas 10 February 2008

excellent title! the first stanza beautifully setting the scene for the second.

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