(a) 23 (Love/Passion) Where's The Thief? Comments

Hey! Last night you were with him. Those were the ardor-lights in your eye! And the lights of the room were dim. You did not wander or run; but shy! You visualized the street of passion; And, you were in awe of his fashion! Whatever made you think it was stolen? Your heart to him; I saw - you had given!

A cute and clever write; enjoyed the title; nicely done.

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