(a) 22 (Love/Passion) Weave Me Into You Comments

Beautiful Poem Tranquil, I really loved it. Take care, You are one talented poet.

This is a nice poem but the whole of itis undermined by the use of 'coz'. You poeticise well, throughout, but plant a slang word in the middle. The word 'because' seems to me to be quite a central word to this poem and it seems a shame to use a dumbed down expression. otherwise bI think it is quite a lovely piece.

Two souls bound so tightly together - wonderful imagery TO, love it. Justine

Praiseworthy! Golden thread of love warped by longing and the caterpillars weave a silk cloth.

Great poem T.O. lots of insperation

Lovely poem TO - strong and inspirational, Steve