Friday, September 15, 2006

(a) 21 (Love/Passion) I Will Be The Music That You Wore Comments

Rating: 3.4

You sing
I will be the mountain and hold your voice deep inside

You feel
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Dr.subhendu Kar 20 April 2008

the tunes of love when splendours by the art of love the color riffles through................most smoching, the varied semblance of love in unison, superb write,10/10, thanks for sharing

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Catastrophe King 30 August 2007

My Response TO: I’ll Be The Music That You Wore… I did sing to reach my voice to you And get your colossal affection! I did feel to reach my mind to you And offer you an earthy heart! I did cry to reach my tears to you And swim your oceanic depth! I did chant to reach my tune to you And comfort in your gentle care! I did fly to reach my love to you And soar in your rising charm! O my love! I did write this to reach you, And, dance in your simple song!

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Sandra Fowler 08 May 2007

That powerful and decisive last line says it all. 'Beautiful' is the word here, I believe. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra

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Rajaram Ramachandran 25 April 2007

You write I will be your fan always.

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Nalini Hebbar 15 September 2006

TO...supportive tranquility...wow...love...nalini

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Preeti - is here! 15 September 2006

Superb, is not enough! I'll be the heart that will cherish all your poems, cause you've awesome! Preets

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jack russell 15 September 2006

You write I will be the book that holds your words within. Comforting poetry :) Jack.

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David Darbyshire 15 September 2006

Oh this is nice tranquil, and if you eat I will feed you Love dave

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Debora Short 15 September 2006

What lovely gifts of heart... songs, support, hugs, joys and support for souls so dear to heart lovely write!

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 15 September 2006

You are most certainly, it appears tht you are someone that can be counted on when in need....Compassion, like Passion is a priceless Virtue, as so is the Spirit within....Excellent Write, T.O.'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr

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Sridhar RVL 15 September 2006

'You dance I will be the music that you wore ' Loved these lines May I add You write I will be the Poem of your heart Great job; Hope

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