Untie the knot for me
of your deep inner secrets....
Give me the key
of your inner fantasies
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Untie the Knot...... Ok I was expecting something totally different....yet was left not disapointed you carried the passanate flow to the very end and beyond.. very well done...
Untie the knot! what a great title...it's live...let me in....lovely poem! Preets
Wow..... I love this TO, the whole theme, the way you depict the scene, the imagery is spectacular! What a beautiful poem.... HG: -) xx
HOLY SMOKES, T.O....You are inded the impressive Sensualistic Poet...... Heart capturing decorum of diction abounds this piece & your work in general since your most welcome return....Pictorials reign strongly over this commanding poem...Rhythm very much in sync with the mellifluous structure you have constructed.A superb penning... FRANK
Oh Wow Tranquil...now this is a really excellent poem! With Great imagery and A WOnderful title that just grabbed me and made me want to see what your poem was all about...I am so happy I came by to say hello. ((Smile)) Another great poem with a beautiiful message.... Thank U so much for sharing Tranquil..........Ten! =Shelley=