Saturday, March 5, 2011

A 17th Century Curse Comments

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In the bottle rests my pee
Collected under a darkling moon
And pared down fingernails, overgrown
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Patti Masterman
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Johnathan Juarez 19 December 2012

I love that first line

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Georgios Venetopoulos 11 November 2012

I smile to it! I like witch stories. And yours! Enchantress is the word for the female sorceress and my latest poem.

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Captain Cur 28 May 2012

To dangerous for me. I'd get drunk and drink you know what. I'm better off suffering the spell. Loved it! What man doesn't love a witch.

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Johnathan Juarez 04 May 2012

cool poem snazzy too thanks

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Karen Deeks 18 March 2012

Intriguing piece of historical smile and all the while she sits protected.. Being a pagan I love this breath of fresh ole air. Thanks. Karen :)

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Martin O'Neill 21 January 2012

Beats Catholicism anyway!

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Raj Arumugam 18 September 2011

Good and imaginative - and perhaps real, Patty...King James (just after Elizabeth 1) might have added this in his history of witchcraft if he only knew this..humorous and scary too...

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Georgios Venetopoulos 24 August 2011

Now, Patti this is an adventurous attempt.. Impressive, imposes the 17th on me, and I cannot see you there, but maybe only to enchant me with your wordry, imagery and a careful almost demure style of writing.. Am I a guest, a host, a friend to share? I 'll be everything, one of my poems you liked a lot, and I was proud! Make me proud again, I believe in that charismatic smile and mind! ..

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Jim Troy 02 August 2011

Quite the informer my friend. Bits and tidbits are very worthy and interesting. I bet those were some wild old days to be living. Especially if around the witchcraft believers and do'ers........ Can you imagine? ......... Jim

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