(a) 17 (Love/Passion) I Wish You To Unfold Me ~ Comments

Great poem that holds alot of truth about what we wish and want from a love relationship! Much emotion was expressed in this well written piece...and then I liked how you wrapped it all up in the end... Great job 'Tranquil Ocean'...Keep up the good work, ==Shelley==

WOW! What a wish! ! ! Sounds good to me. Nice flowing rhythmic piece. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

Sizzling but tender... love that gush of emotion, devotion, perhaps. Uplifting to read.Yes, it all lies in the 'unfolding'... that one word says it all. Splendid work. t x