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A-133. लम्हा लम्हा जिंदगी यूँ ही कटेगी Comments

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लम्हा लम्हा जिंदगी यूँ ही कटेगी 10.12.15—4.00 PM

लम्हा लम्हा जिंदगी यूँ ही कटेगी
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Amrit Pal Singh Gogia
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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 May 2016

Very amazingly drafted motivational poem really. This reflects your poetic idea...10

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M Asim Nehal 24 May 2016

Kya baat hai...ye zindagi ek lamba safar hai behkna hai mumkin bhatakne ka darr hai........It reminded me this song. Very well written poem.10++++

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Thank you so much Asim Ji for wonderful inspiring comments

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Ratnakar Mandlik 24 May 2016

Zindgi to chalati hi rahegi. Bada khubsurat hai paigam is kavita main. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Thank you so much for inspiring comments & points.

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Amrit Pal Singh Gogia

Amrit Pal Singh Gogia

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