(a) 12 (Love/Passion) As Real As... Comments
As real as air, earth and water
As real as a lovers fight
As real as teh laughter
Of a child in delight....
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Passionate and longing piece. I can imagine this piece being sited to a lover before the moment of true desire and love meet.... well done!
And on that find read..................hmhmhmhmhmhmhm...........TENsion mounting.............well done T>O>
TELL YA WHATS REAL.....YOUR WORK & THE EFFORT THAT OBVIOUSLY GOES INTO ITS MAKINGS.....SOLID WRITE, T.O. F. j. R.
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7/23/2025 8:53:20 AM # 1.0.0
apart from the one typo 'teh' which should read 'the'..the poem is flawless and amazing!