Tuesday, September 5, 2006

(a) 11 (Love/Passion) A Wanderer In Love Comments

Rating: 3.5

My heart is a wanderer in love
May it ever remain so
Roaming in the pathless land
In a caravan
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Catastrophe King 30 August 2007

My Response TO: A Wanderer In Love She did let her heart meander in love; And, that’s how she wished it remain! She let her heart move in procession; As winds blew over the trail-less land! She portrayed her heart as wretched; Just ruthlessly blustered in all ways! She experienced her heart’s rare search; For that everlasting & true legendary love! She knew many blemishes of her heart; Yet, she did intone on the very love’s ode! She always had heart yearning the moon; And, wandered the desert, digging dunes! She knows that until her ghost is given up; This chase wouldn’t end, yet to be realized!

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Melvina Germain 07 May 2007

Longing for Love, wondering when will it happen to me. One day it will take you by surprise like a flower bursting to bloom. Excellent poem Tranquil.--Melvina--

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Ruby Root 05 September 2006

Hi Tranquil, It will come when your least expecting it and it will be so wonderful. Excellent poem, Take care. Don't give up....

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Geoff Warden 05 September 2006

an excellent contradiction....as love is........

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Nalini Hebbar 05 September 2006

Longing for the moon Searching in the dunes...TO this is so sad...and beautiful...love...nalini

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