♥ Interwined In Lace♥ Comments

beautiful poem, heartfelt feelings, great job.

Interesting work here. Of Course, the title is enigmatic. What is the 'wine' reference all about and how does one become inter-wined? Perhaps you meant to say the lace was wound around you and he? Adeline

this is beautiful writing love, it definitly from the heart, im not sure what to say its so private but so many people can relate, keep up the good work! sara-rae xx

It's great writing can make me remember 'those days'. This is wonderful and smokin' (in a sweet, sincere fashion) .

Tyease my dear this is so nice - your words are so heart felt and warm from your soul a real pleasure to read the love you felt. Thank You

Easy to see these are written straight from the heart - excellent - spelling needs a little fixing but still worth 10

Beautifully writen! think it is one everyone can relate to! well done! !

I like this poem a lot but if you could please change... are fingers.... the first word in this line and a few after that to the correct spelling our. because our and are have two different meanings and it might bug them as it did me. other than that this is an amazing piece and i just love it

Ooh! , Mi Cada Cosa, this is quite Amorous, I love it! Love, Kyle

Very sensuous write. You have used excelent imagery filled with the heat of pasion that comes with such warm, spicy love.... Very good... Bonnie

I love you're poem and enough you're life

really like this one :)

this is a good poem way to good i would rate it a 15/10 and its pretty long but its really good got me a little sad D=