Saturday, September 24, 2011

♥ I Need Your Hand To Hold ♥ Comments

Rating: 3.0

♥ I had closed the door upon my heart
and wouldn't let anyone in
I had trusted and loved only to be hurt
but that would never happen again
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Shaikh Haneef
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Theany Ouy 29 October 2011

Beautifully written, Insightful and profound. Your emotions expressed deeply from the heart. Love is the greatest feeling one can have. So when that feeling comes, we tend to weaken our hearts and open the door. For love is what we seek as happiness follows. Thank you for sharing such a lovely piece.

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Sonali Sings 20 October 2011

Wonderful Haneef...poems come from heart really, not enough words for praise!

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*BleedingHeart* *Arielle* 14 October 2011

wow this was amazing i loved it it is kinda like me i never open my heart cuz i always get hurt but it was so romantic i just cant help but love this poem will u plz go and read mine? thank you

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Jacqui Broad 08 October 2011

How can an ice cube not melt? You write so beautifully sincere...

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Diana Rose Tolentino 03 October 2011

it moved me.. I have to agree with everone. Well, everyone needs someone (in my point of view) ..and this poem has that depth of romance that made the hearts of the readers melt. (',) thumbs up.!

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Elena Sandu 26 September 2011

Beautiful sweet and lovely written, makes hearts warm and to me bring the memory of youth lovely time.

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Jessie Hopkins 25 September 2011

Your poems are amazingly awesome! (Sorry for the over used 'American' word) :)

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Unwritten Soul 24 September 2011

This write embedded with vision of love..such a nice writing, keep more to come Shaikh.. :) Unwritten Soul

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Sharron Stephenson 24 September 2011

a good poem with strength from the heart

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