The moment you came into my life
I knew you were the one
to keep me so right
and as we began life’s journey
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Truly a beautiful love poem! More love on your way dear friend! <3 <3 <3 mwah!
I will always love YOU.♥ ♥ ♥ Lovely tribute to your valentine I can hear the violins now he's coming to get you with a kiss now...bless his cotton socks I give him a +++10 regards
This was stunning..I just it as an e-card. You have a wonderful way of capturing the heart.10+! Pls. read my latest The Love Symphony! Thanks!
I loved the way you expressed your feelings.It's so romantic poem.my heart attached to your poem.Indeed it's a great piece of work.
'I love you until our forever’s return to the heavens where we shall meet again'... This line is superb...reflects sweet and sincere love sentiments... Great love poem Meggie...thanks...10
'You...I love you until our forever return' A lovely poem Meggie!
A beautiful tribute to your Valentine. May you both be blessed. Love, SandraX
Through and through soaked in love You are sure our darling dove. CP
This is really a beautiful romantic poem, seeking for eternal love too. Your pen is great with the word 'love', Meggie.
The moment you came into my life I knew you were the one to keep me so right and as we began life......opening and concluding para speaks of its fairnesss with honesty. i liked with all my sincerity... bewt one....10 read mine i miss.. parting ways... no separate ways... i miss.. miss i miss you...Mary to marry...virginity at stake(latest)
such a romantic poem, the thoughts are deep than the ocean...captivating contents....10
Hi Meggie - This a beautiful LOVE POEM for Valentine's week. It is a beautifully structured poems - four balanced quintains and sufficient attention to metre to make it flow and recite excellently. It deserves a score of TEN on all poetic criteria. Emotional Love is aways about two people and tis is implicit in the title and the first line. 'The moment YOU came into my life'. and Verse One includes the element of Eternal love. Verse Two - Such an excellent metaphore 'Your eyes are the waves of my soul' and the concept of Spellbinding Love. Verse Three - The importance of 'touch and talk' in Intimate Love. You include my favorite 'love words' Cherish - caress - hold me tightly - loving - whisper - gentle moon peeps through - always - A MEGA VERSE! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Verse Four - AWESOME - The depth - glow - eternity - hope of TRUE LOVE 'I love you until our forever's return to the heavens where we will meet again - I will always love YOU'. Because we have Eterenal Life (Through faith in God) true love forged on Earth is Eternal. Thanks for sharing straight from your loving heart. Love you in Poetry - JOHN.
A phenomenal poem by all means. Simple verses that go straight into the reader's heart. You have expressed your love so intensely and emotionally. Take a second look at the last line. I think 'shall meet' will correctly tell the grammar.
you have expressed your love so intensely, emotionally - one can see what makes you tick, you lucky girl. such is the stuff dreams are made of... Mamta
What a romantic tribute you have penned from deep within your heart, written so tenderly and lined with all the love from your heart......Bonnie
A beautiful love poem, everybody can relate... sweet, sweet, sweet