♥ 09/03/2008 B Eyes The Passion The Fire ♥ Comments

wow what a romantic piece..liked it..hmm well done 10/10

Don't worry about the 'falling' part of love. It's the sudden stop that will get ya. My poem, 'Lovers Leap, ' plays with this same concept. The poem, just like LOVE is more complicated that it first looks. The title implies a high cliff that lovers in despair jump off. However, I did not use the 's. 'Lovers' is just plural. If you get a chance to look at the poem, you'll see my opinion is that 'we don't fall in love/rather we leap at each other.' Thanks for you comment on my poem 'IRISH LOVE.' The joke was told to me my a guy who should know, and also, know better not to let his wife overhear.

what a nice rhyme.................with passion all around! nice piece coreena.