Tuesday, March 4, 2008

♥ 03/04/2008 B Crying Because I Love ♥ Comments

Rating: 4.5

When we are over were not over I'll be your friend,
Sorry that our passionate love didn't last till the end,
I still love you so very much this is so true,
I could have spent every moment of my life with you.
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Coreena Dejesus
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Afzal Shauq 09 January 2010

awesome..lovely and professinally written piece.great task...10/10

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Siddharth Singh 18 July 2009

As a reader i can hear the poet's heart cry. Very nice.

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Rani Turton 14 July 2009

Sweet and sad, Coreena. A wonderful poignant read.

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Michael K 10 April 2008

Coreena, I know this pain very well.....another beautiful poem.....sad but very beautiful. Thank you!

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Dr.subhendu Kar 16 March 2008

yet poignant love as when wistful lost to plume by the reeks of rankling as reasons to reason by the hearts when hold as love when tweaked being rilled upon.............most painful sorrow on the other side...........well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 15 March 2008

so heartfelt and beautiful, thanks for sharing

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 11 March 2008

Poetry that is so sad, some guys don't know the wonderful things we have.. Andy 10

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Lesley Bass 08 March 2008

wow i love that peom but very sad still: '(

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Sreelekha Premjit 08 March 2008

A lot of pain comes with love. Sad but true. You said it so beautifully.

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Frostie Lisette 06 March 2008

This means a lot i knowhowthis is like its quite sad and ur a very unique writer

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Original Unknown Girl 06 March 2008

this is so sad, you can sense the emotions are flowing like a river in this poem. I hope you find happiness with someone else who's meant to give you all the things you mentioned herein. HG: -) xx

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I know this feeling.... heartfelt. t x

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 06 March 2008

u have a heart of a true lover.....i liked it

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Vidyadhar ... 05 March 2008

nice one from the depth of the heart

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Coreena Dejesus

Coreena Dejesus

USA (Born in MA) (Raised in MI)
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