When we are over were not over I'll be your friend,
Sorry that our passionate love didn't last till the end,
I still love you so very much this is so true,
I could have spent every moment of my life with you.
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Coreena, I know this pain very well.....another beautiful poem.....sad but very beautiful. Thank you!
yet poignant love as when wistful lost to plume by the reeks of rankling as reasons to reason by the hearts when hold as love when tweaked being rilled upon.............most painful sorrow on the other side...........well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing
Poetry that is so sad, some guys don't know the wonderful things we have.. Andy 10
A lot of pain comes with love. Sad but true. You said it so beautifully.
This means a lot i knowhowthis is like its quite sad and ur a very unique writer
this is so sad, you can sense the emotions are flowing like a river in this poem. I hope you find happiness with someone else who's meant to give you all the things you mentioned herein. HG: -) xx
I know this feeling.... heartfelt. t x
awesome..lovely and professinally written piece.great task...10/10