Saturday, May 12, 2007

♠ Ballad Of Gunner The Gambler: His Final Effort ♠ Comments

Rating: 5.0

His addiction takes him over to
the bank he did business with.
He brings along the essentials;
A forty five and a laundry bag.
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Michael Fischer
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David Harris 12 May 2007

Michael, this is an interesting poem and an equally interesting moral. You can always be tempted, the conscience kicks in and puts the element of doubt to stop you. Lovely flow to this poem. Top marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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