... ☻ A Deal With The Devil (Dark) Comments

Repercussions of evil well depicted in the poem. A well articulated piece of poetry that reminds us of Karma - the law of Retributive Justice. A lovely poem insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

'Devil's gold is sweet'... perhaps the devil knows it best! ...a sweet work on devil and its gold...thanks

A devil should not emanate out of our ambitions and greed, in order to devour our values.Extremely nice poem with good imageries of thoughts.

devil is the dark side of self, i suppose...

Beautiful imagery, put pictures in my head, very well written, good choice of words.

wow, very intense. thought provoking expressions.

its a thought provoking poem 10+

so meaningful and touching..tnx for this poem eyan

wuu.. it realld did touch my heart.. thanks for wiriting :)

Cool. ' at the end of the river', ' drink a stream of pain', ' fed with juicy lies' You use words very wisely. We must of course ultimately pay the price for all deals we make with the devil, for all days we have each become a ' minion of evil'. Nice write. Brilliantly impressive.

This is cool, I also write dark poetry you should go and take a look :) 10 from me!

To make a deal with the devil and to have your desires fulfilled as you want it is all an illusion. When such is fulfilled, you discover to your chagrin that it is all a disappointment and you will find yourself in a realm of condemnation and damnation. Fascinating to read.

fantastic... a perfect 10

Fantastic poem &im nt at all scared bt i loved reading it...10++

Fantastic poem &im nt at all scared bt i loved reading it...10++

great peom very kool...i like thats all i write is dark peoms...i tried to write happy ones but they sux my dark peoms have emotion...but i loved it! ! ! 10+

The dark side of humanity...I do not fear the that side of me. I turn the 'Light' [the source of everything] then watch it flee. A good write Eyan and a 10++

well done! sharp and quite in 10

first thank you so much for your care and what a great wrods you have...it shows what we all have inside with the devil keep going...you are so good

Just as it says on the tin - dark and devilish, devilicious even! S :)