Wednesday, January 2, 2008

962: Just Through My Eyes! Comments

Rating: 3.8

If, she would have caught the sight of me,
And, she would have seen the genuine soul!
I am sure of the fact that she would understand,
That her sheer presence would send shivers to my nerves.
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Deborah Cromer 19 August 2009

Very powerful and said with tragedy. This poem tells a story of an honest thought. You are correct in thinking of what if, and if only. There is mystery here too. I love how you give sight to how things might be. DC

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V F 02 January 2008

A truly wonderful poem dressed with such beauty... 'If only! She would have seen herself... Just through my eyes'

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