Tuesday, June 11, 2013

96 No More A Conundrum Comments

Rating: 5.0

No revelation
The product of
Their square root
Was un-whole.
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Danny Draper
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R.benjamin Abate 25 June 2013

Good one. Love can be so familiar yet so mysterious at the same time.

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Owain Glyn 14 June 2013

If you can 'count' on me for anything, it's that the 'sum' of the parts, never adds up to the whole!

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Kevin Patrick 13 June 2013

I bet this is not one you read to a girl on a first date. Slight absurdity of Euclidean geometry, awesome read

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Chuck Audette 13 June 2013

Will there be an ode to 69 next? Or is it just this one read in reverse?

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R.j. Wynn 12 June 2013

Wheeeeeeeeeeeeew, I started a brain storm of epic reality.

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Gajanan Mishra 11 June 2013

good write, thanks, Please read my poems and comment.

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Danny Draper

Danny Draper

Kiama, New South Wales, Australia
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