Monday, January 7, 2008

956: Silence In Love. Comments

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I yearn for an expression of your love for me, but quiet are your lips.
Your lips blush readily with the essence of rubies.
They breathe life, they tremble and quiver,
Yet they are silent - with the words I want to hear.
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Lalitha iyer 22 February 2009

Dear poet, it is the epitome of expression when one cannot express what one feels. When the feeling is at the superlative degrees, words are a waste or ill expressed. Beautiful lines. But y catastrope king?

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Cherry Sha 19 December 2008

Silence can express the emotions that words can't. Nice...

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V F 15 January 2008

What lovely flowing poetry straight from the heart... yes, indeed..there is a language beyond silence.. that strives to show the depth of love...

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