Last summer you all departed
Fading to see the fuming sun.
All of you were not seen around
Until merciless autumn was over.
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wonderful poem from your pen; i had the hunch that you can write wonderful Nature poem; this is a proof; sequence and expansions are very well done... when i was listening to FM Radio yesterday one mother shared that ' Valentine Day ' is not for lovers only; it could be for mother child also; that mother is right; what a Valentine day presentation to ' Maa'......great poem....love this piece...keep giving similar feasts....
Nature plays its part systematically whereas man is anti-nature and behaves unsystematically. Yet, it is mother's natire to love her children, good or bad. A good is born from Savithiri's pen.