Monday, May 14, 2007

(951) A Big Mistake Comments

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The morning sun trickles through the shade.
Our love takes on a new charade.
The pillow beside me is empty still,
another day of lies at will.
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Melvina Germain
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JoAnn McGrath 15 May 2007

You tackled a hard subject here very well...Why is it that one must look beyond what they have right under their nose....and when they leave it for something else...only then is it missed.....One of them many human errors that boggles the mind.....well done again Melvina

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Lorena Walker 14 May 2007

Wow! That is really good. You put this subject into nice words!

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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