Tuesday, September 9, 2008

946: A True Love Message Comments

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Do not get slashed for love -
For that will always be afar!
Do not get crammed for nothing;
Better be spaced from love, thus! !
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Catastrophe KING
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* Sunprincess * 29 July 2015

...........excellent write....thanks for sharing ★

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Deborah Cromer 19 August 2009

Ah yes...With every heartbeat, with every breath, one must go with caution when it is with true love. It is reality, a shame that we cannot just dive in and be happy forever. Your poem writes truth mixed with pain. You must have experience here? Broken hearts make better writers. Love is perfect, finding the right person is not easy. People are not perfect. Good writing. DC

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Malini Kadir 18 December 2008

how wise KING but so oft hard to follow.......what to say....poetry says it all!

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