I’m the man behind the bars
We talk through walls and I wonder how I got here
I’m a boy, I’m a little too trusting
And I can’t help wondering what you think of me
                
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did you edit this? it seems soooooo much better since the first time i read it...
All I can say is wow. It's super good. Which I wouldn't suspect any more or any less from you. All your work is amazing. Keep the good work up!

 
                     
                
It really makes one sympathize with the speaker. Well done!