(935) Make Me Smile Comments
I close my eyes and think only of you,
for you are my drink of champagne,
my light, my treasure, my cup of tea,
my love, you are everything to me.
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What a warm and charming poem. A delight to read and more than worthy of a ten. Love, Sandra
I detect a new way of walking, a new way of talking, and a new way of combing your hair.........and it's all very becomimg!
Talking of champagne, this poem is so Bubbly too... Andy 10
Lovely piece of work Melvina, a pleasure to read you once again. Lovely poem, dreamy and romantic. Great stuff. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
Mel, now if I wasn't married and wee younger than I am I would take you up on that tempting offer. Sadly I am married and a wee older that I look., so I'll have to decline in the nicest possible way. Beautiful poem and wonderful read. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David
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8/7/2025 9:42:43 PM # 1.0.0
WOW, Melvina...you were in quite the mood when you wrote this! I Love this piece...it is sweet and Beautiful! Did you write this while listening to music? Keep sharing your imagery full poetry that heals us, your readers.........and sustains us...like food for the soul, Smile! Hope to sea you again soon my friend. P.S The water is cominggggggggg! ! Can't wait! God Bless