Monday, June 11, 2007

(931) Mama-“the Great Enabler” Comments

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Eddie sleeps till a quarter to four.
He never wakes up to go through the door.
The idea of- WORK- is so absurd,
he practically chokes on the very word.
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Melvina Germain
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Melvina! Wow! We had the same thoughts on the same day...about enabling others...Great minds, lol! ! Honestly your poem is Great and flows so well...and says so much. Mine actually when I read it again and again...it is just a note where I am venting.....MINE ' Who are you enamblng'....sadly is not really much of a poem! This poem is cute and is so true of many parents with sometimes rotten kids...mostly because we enable them to be rooten and irresponsible and just spoiled...NOT their fault entirely...of course they can choose to not be that way but why when they have someone to catch them when they fall and clean up their messes! ! ! Great work 10/10! ! ! Talk 2 u later today... Shelley

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Ernestine Northover 12 June 2007

Great flow and a great poem Melvina. You have captured it all so well Lovely write and a lovely read. Thanks for penning it. love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Aldo Kraas 11 June 2007

Somebody spoils him rotten

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JoAnn McGrath 11 June 2007

spoiled to the core that baby boy...I like the rhythm in this one

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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