Friday, August 15, 2008

#93 Poetry In Motion These Hands Comments

Rating: 2.8

These hands hold small bowls
Of muted laughter
Rising with soft edges
Against the sky
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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes
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Michael Gale 24 March 2019

NICE, VERY, VERY NICE, FOR SURE! ! !

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Adeline Foster 25 May 2016

Almost a Haiku, still well done. Read mine - To Lander - Adeline

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Short but significant my friend!

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Elena Sandu 21 April 2015

Wow! Masterful pen, filling such a little space with words to overflow entire world with smiles! Lovely read!

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Shelbie butz 15 August 2008

wow such a short poem with a powerful message. very creative.

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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Baltimore, Maryland
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