(922) Hidden Truth Comments

This my friend is a Brilliant piece that makes me cry...The truth hurts so much to see in black and white.I know the place you were in then...it was dark and you could not see your way clear of depression, sorrow and Loss... I was not going to comment on this one but I had to acknowledge your pain and hurt and your feelings at the time.I know you still go through these times to this day...what I pray though is that it is not as often. I am not just saying this, your poem is so full of feeling and full of Greatness....as always your work holds so much promise.It is always hard to say but the best poems come from Great pain or happiness or just any strong emotion... Thanx for sharing Melvina sorry for your pain.10/ten! This one is going in my favorites... God Bless. Love, Shelley

Melvina, a great poem. Expressed everything that I was feeling about mid week, last week. It really touched my soul, thanks for pointing it out to me. - David

Interesting write, Melvina. Nothing hidden in this piece... you've exposed a truth that so many of us live with day to day. It's just some of us hide it better than others. Well done! Brian