(918) A Secret Love Comments

My friend this is a delightful read! A passionate display of romanticism. Excellent....

love still persist by the winds of the night as when wishful across the maple leaves..............lovely poem, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

Romance is alive and well in this lovely poem. Aways good to read you, Melvina. Always your friend, Sandra

Hi Melvina, This poem is beautiful it really pulls the heartstrings, wonderful write! ! Thank you for sharing! ! *10*! ! Friend Thad

Mel, this is a wonderful poem for the someone you miss and love so much. One day you'll meet beyond the sunset and never be parted again. Loved the rhythmic structure of this beautiful poem. It sings as you read along. Top marks and thanks for sharing this my special friend across the pond. David

Melvina, you brought a tear to the eye, this poem is just beautiful and i know for who you write, one day you will be together again and the flame will relight.... Andy 10.. I think this beauty belongs in my fav writes... Andy xxx

Imagework, grandeur, young lady...melodioUs rhythm...lyrically compatable with its musical tone-set...Sterling Work, Melvina! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..