When I walked into a fish bar
I fancied fish and fries
But when I got inside the bar
I couldn’t believe my eyes
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superb.............hats off to your imagination.............
I could imagine this working exceptionally well as a performance piece, possibly recited by a primary school group at a children's concert, as well as being a thoroughly enjoyable read. Many thanks, Tim Woodhouse
David, wonderful piece of humour. Enjoyed this with a passion.10 Dai
Fantastic poem, wonderful flow and imagination. Reading it brings the medicine of humor.Great job