Saturday, September 13, 2008

.910. The Fish Bar Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I walked into a fish bar
I fancied fish and fries
But when I got inside the bar
I couldn’t believe my eyes
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David Threadgold
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Tj Becker 16 November 2008

Fantastic poem, wonderful flow and imagination. Reading it brings the medicine of humor.Great job

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Bob Blackwell 25 October 2008

David, this truly superb, your imagination is amazing. Bob

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Reshma Ramesh 20 October 2008

superb.............hats off to your imagination.............

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Tim Woodhouse 19 October 2008

I could imagine this working exceptionally well as a performance piece, possibly recited by a primary school group at a children's concert, as well as being a thoroughly enjoyable read. Many thanks, Tim Woodhouse

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Pamela Lutwyche 18 October 2008

I enjoyed your poem. It’s very funny

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Dai Bach 13 September 2008

David, wonderful piece of humour. Enjoyed this with a passion.10 Dai

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