Tuesday, January 12, 2010

*907 Stay As Sweet As You Are (Ghazal) Comments

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Excuse me asking - 'Does he take - Sugar? '
'Would he like on lump or two of - Sugar? '

Cornflakes? I'm afraid we're out of Sugar
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Patti Masterman 03 May 2010

I want to write a ghazal so badly! Thanks for this inspiration.

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Lady Grace 19 January 2010

the sweetest thing on earth is sugar coz it possesses all the sweet components/elements of planet earth...so, perhaps instead of saying'' hi sweetheart'' i will rather say, ''hi sugarheart''...aaaa, hehehheheeh..................................................................................c o r n y......., , , , smileeeeeeeee this piece is a nice one...ghazal is already at peace...

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Meggie Gultiano 13 January 2010

a sweet poem, John..but afraid i will be a diabetic after (God forbids) I have to be careful This is nice John.. Your words are full of sugar, careful with the ants..! ! !

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John Knight

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