Saturday, January 9, 2010

*906 Two Hearts As One (Rondelet) Comments

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The RONDELET consists of seven lines. Lines One - three - seven have four syllables and are identical. Lines Two - four - five - six have eight syllables. Line four rhymes with line three and lines two - five - six all rhyme with each other. A - b - A - a - b - b - A simple! This poem consists of five consecutive thematically linked RONDELET.

Two hearts as one
Two hearts that beat in unity
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John Knight
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Christian Navarro 01 May 2010

i have been reading this for the nth time. wonderful poem.

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Ken E Hall 23 January 2010

A love eternal - without pause Making sweet love......what more is there great write regards

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Sarah Bishop 13 January 2010

OMG, I loved this poem so much, I actually shed a tear, and the poem was so great! ! ! keep writing those lovely poems of yours.

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Janell Cressman 12 January 2010

wow, truely amazing! ! ! ! (10)

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Merna Ibrahim 12 January 2010

What a great love! & What a great and romantic poem! ! You always teach us Mr.John....10 Indeed~

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Beauty Philosophy 09 January 2010

An beautiful description of craving for an unreachable love.Thnx for sharing.

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Christian Navarro 09 January 2010

wow. this is one of the great poem i read.. i would want to read more of your poems. thanks for sharing.

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John Knight

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