Lovers stroll barefoot on the sandy
beach hand in hand. Cool winds
sensually blowing through curls of
silky black hair.
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Melvina....is this you in the poem...on the beach. There is bittersweet nostalgia as if each recognise that parting is their lot in life. Very sensitive without being mawkish....B
this is very romantic, Melvina. you spry heartbreaker, you...ha...beautiful scene and wonderful flow right to the heartfelt ending. memorable read. -Tailor
Ahhhhh! Viva La Romance....C'est la Vie, mon ami...Tres Bon, Madamoiselle M. '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
This adorable love story steals our hearts. An attractive word painting Melvina. Good byes are always sad it seems?
very well written, but another sad ending! lol you write like me! ! great work!