Saturday, October 21, 2006

(905) Steal Away Comments

Rating: 3.2

Lovers stroll barefoot on the sandy
beach hand in hand. Cool winds
sensually blowing through curls of
silky black hair.
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Melvina Germain
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Kurt Rees 20 February 2007

very well written, but another sad ending! lol you write like me! ! great work!

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James James 30 October 2006

Melvina....is this you in the poem...on the beach. There is bittersweet nostalgia as if each recognise that parting is their lot in life. Very sensitive without being mawkish....B

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Tailor Bell 29 October 2006

this is very romantic, Melvina. you spry heartbreaker, you...ha...beautiful scene and wonderful flow right to the heartfelt ending. memorable read. -Tailor

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 22 October 2006

Ahhhhh! Viva La Romance....C'est la Vie, mon ami...Tres Bon, Madamoiselle M. '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Nimal Dunuhinga 21 October 2006

This adorable love story steals our hearts. An attractive word painting Melvina. Good byes are always sad it seems?

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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