9 Unworthy Tears Comments

Wow. I loved the ryhming in this one. It seems to kind of playfully display the hurt and the pain while TOTALLY displaying the message. Loved it, as usual

ok, kiddo, story time. this reminds me of the time i cried like 8 or 9 times last year because this guy that liked me didn't want to be with me...it just kinda hit again when i read this. *pats on shoulder* you're not the only one, kid. eni da kid

I know that feeling, and you've brought it out superbly in this poem. How in a minute everything changes...you touched me with this one~! Preets

Well, I understand completely. I can't even begin to describe how much that poem hit me. I almost cried it was really well written.

That was a good one... :)