Saturday, May 1, 2021

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I left the candle of love burning,
Where I saw the fire in coke missing.

There were many literates and laureates around,
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M. Asim Nehal
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Bri Edwards 24 November 2024

(cont.) ...Valentine(s) cards with other students to wish them a Happy Valentine's Day.

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Bri Edwards 24 November 2024

Here in the United States of (silly) America....in my 'early school years' students sometimes were assigned by their teacher to exchange...(cont.)

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Bri Edwards 24 November 2024

(cont.) ... Cupid uses his arrows to manipulate people's romantic feelings towards others, often with playful and sometimes mischievous results. '

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Bri Edwards 24 November 2024

(cont.) ..fall deeply in love with the next person they see, while a separate leaden arrow can cause aversion or dislike; essentially, .....(cont.)

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Bri Edwards 24 November 2024

Learn more In Greek and Roman mythology, Cupid's arrow represents the power of love, where he, the god of love, shoots a golden arrow at someone to make them....(cont.)

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Bri Edwards 24 November 2024

I really liked the last two lines: Are you, Asim, Cupid? ? ? I, Bri, don't 'do' philosophical thinking, OR don't think of it as such if I do.

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Bri Edwards 24 November 2024

One use of 'insight': a deep understanding of a person or thing. plural noun: insights 'the signals would give marine biologists new insights into the behavior of whales'

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Bharati Nayak 24 November 2024

A great poem! I liked the lines-There were many literates and laureates around, Yet when I peeped closely, I saw humanity missing.

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Bri Edwards 24 November 2024

'coke', as a noun, is 1 - a solid fuel made by heating coal in the absence of air AND 2 - [capitalized[ a carbonated 'soft drink' I'm guessing M. A. N. (man!) is referring to the fuel. : )

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me poet yeps poet 05 November 2022

VERY NICELY SAID ALL WHEN MISSIG BUT WHEN YOU COME TO ME I SHALL BE MISSING MISSING

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Anjandev Roy 04 July 2021

.....the bow was missing.....excellent...

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Deepak S S 07 May 2021

Just wow poem. Liked the theme.

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Deepak S S 04 May 2021

All couplets are fabulous.5*

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Suzon Albert 04 May 2021

There were many literates and laureates around, Yet when I peeped closely, I saw humanity missing.

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Varsha M 03 May 2021

And what was missing leave it there are many yet to be fathomed. Focus on that. A beautiful heartfelt missing poem. Well woven artwork.

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Crafty poem in ghazal format. Loved it.

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Darren Jkoeryo 02 May 2021

DJ liked it...In particular: Though I had many arrows in my quiver, When I found the target, the bow was missing.

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Shreya Hacks 02 May 2021

Wow And I cried a lot after separating from you, When the heart really wanted the peace, the tears were missing.

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S H 02 May 2021

Life is a package 📦 with many surprising gifts. Some are found and others missing.

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S H 02 May 2021

Life is p

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M. Asim Nehal

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