9 Missing ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

9 Missing ~

Rating: 5.0


I left the candle of love burning,
Where I saw the fire in coke missing.

There were many literates and laureates around,
Yet when I peeped closely, I saw humanity missing.

The beauty was all around in that valley
Though eyes could see and enjoy, insight was missing.

And I cried a lot after separating from you,
When the heart really wanted the peace, the tears were missing.

Though I had many arrows in my quiver,
When I found the target, the bow was missing.

Saturday, May 1, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mamta S 02 May 2021

Nothing is perfect in this world. 👌we find one or the other thing always missing...Fantabulous 5 stars

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Suzon Albert 04 May 2021

There were many literates and laureates around, Yet when I peeped closely, I saw humanity missing.

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Varsha M 03 May 2021

And what was missing leave it there are many yet to be fathomed. Focus on that. A beautiful heartfelt missing poem. Well woven artwork.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 02 May 2021

1) Having read and counted: 7 Missing, the last two were missing too, but this is amazingly worded and marvelously created, the beauty all around in that valley, though only insight was missing, never mind though insight was missing, .

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Bri Edwards 24 November 2024

Hey, Sylvia, HOW DO YOU KNOW that 'the last two were missing'? ? You might be WRONG! ! ! The missing 'missings' might be the 3rd and 7th missings! ! Think about THAT! !

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Bri Edwards 24 November 2024

(cont.) ...Valentine(s) cards with other students to wish them a Happy Valentine's Day.

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Bri Edwards 24 November 2024

Here in the United States of (silly) America....in my 'early school years' students sometimes were assigned by their teacher to exchange...(cont.)

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Bri Edwards 24 November 2024

(cont.) ... Cupid uses his arrows to manipulate people's romantic feelings towards others, often with playful and sometimes mischievous results. '

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Bri Edwards 24 November 2024

(cont.) ..fall deeply in love with the next person they see, while a separate leaden arrow can cause aversion or dislike; essentially, .....(cont.)

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Bri Edwards 24 November 2024

Learn more In Greek and Roman mythology, Cupid's arrow represents the power of love, where he, the god of love, shoots a golden arrow at someone to make them....(cont.)

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