9. Breathing “between” Two Worlds Comments

dear abhaji, your words will follow everyone until death.... poet is a someone sentensed for life... you punished me while i am a freebird...

Beautiful. 10+ for it.

This is just too good..the breathing between two worlds..how sensitive and how depressing...you have a way with words...it was lovely! Best wishes, Gul

you write magic abha... and you write about such strong emotions... so true.. hats off to you......! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

really nicely written...with sensitivity and feeling.. best wishes, mehreen

Your compassion becomes you. In reaching out to others, you may find your greatest consolation. Praise for your sensitivity. Warm regards, Sandra

Abha, It is difficult to live in this checkered world of good bad, up down, rich and poor. It is important not to let any one feeling break you down. Between the blessings and the curse we must find joy amongst the despair. Take care, Richard

A very humbling poem Abha, it flows well and shows your compassion, thanks, Lynda xx

Abha, another wonderful poem you have served up for us to read and enjoy. Top marks and thank for sharing this my friend. David

Outstanding writer, such flow of expression runs into the readers eyes...wonderful poetess...10/10 best wishes Jon

Hello poet friend and this poem is perfect. Great work, I'm honored to have someone like you read and review my poems. Thanks for sharing, LC

This Journey we are all upon, is not easy one, some dropp out hardly before it's begun, others go on and on, we are given this gift no matter how short or long, no need for guilt or tears, just remember those that went before us and hold them dear... Andy 10

I like your manner of writing … and it in a verse you originally underline that people remembered others, … (and about rich which too sincere «a help hand …» though «Whenever» only the god with can 'think' …sincere

When I sleep I see clearly remains of done up fish in the immensity of sky Beautiful pigmentation in otherwise bland but very present spectre of guilt Shabash Abha

Wonderful poem... it exposes the dilemma faced by us all..how right is it to enjoy whn others suffer but most us end up ignoring it n live in a illusion rather than face ourselves!

Really good poem. You've painted the guilt you feel so very much because of your position in relation to others' suffering. It's a humbling write and you really brought the differences to the fore with the analogies surrounding the senses. Enjoyed this very much. HG: -) xx

you have very sensitively depicted the sense of guilt we feel when we see the difference between several realities and social inequalities.i believe we can't change the world but if we can make a difference in some way to even one person its worth it.thanks for sharing.

The more one's social conscience is developed, the more questions come to mind. One cannot wipe out the suffering of the entire world, but one can make a difference to the lives of people we interact with. It could be survival issues, even plain loneliness of the young or old. Remember Buddha and his anguish when he first confronted human suffering? Thanks for this poem.

I am amazed by the sensitivity of this poem and the consequent empathy it evoked...absolutely love the contrast you have developed here.. wonderful poem..

You create a lovely contrast in this work Abha. For every happy soul in the world, another is weeping. Best wishes, Andrew