(881) Faded Erection Comments
Dreams of grandeur consumes the hour,
meek to powerful thoughts of mind.
Skin unfolding erect and smooth,
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Melvina, I like the underlying humour in this piece. The flow and the rhythm just dragged you along to the end. I really felt for the poor man in this piece. As David said before me. I think he could do with some Viagra. Beautifully written as always. Thanks for sharing it. David
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7/29/2025 5:21:38 PM # 1.0.0
March 9 2009? ? A vision of the future Melvina. Rigor mortis at best can last for only four days. Rigourously written. Not stiff in the least. Humourous and humbling. An outstanding feast!