Thursday, April 19, 2007

(880) Heart Of Steel Comments

Rating: 3.1

Hues of blue encase my being,
nestled in the shadows of space.
Fear not brave warrior, I commit no crime,
nor ponder any such disgrace.
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Melvina Germain
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David Dennis 30 April 2007

Got no idea what that's about, but it made me laugh. Thats clever.

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Melvina....I do love to read your words. Thank you for being the first to welcome me here.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 26 April 2007

Sayest thou all knights are lazy, my fair lady art thou crazy..? Melvina

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Tailor Bell 21 April 2007

powerful personification and alliteration make this a very enjoyable read. strong work and a fine read, Melvina. -Tailor

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JoAnn McGrath 20 April 2007

I love the words here : O) but I bet that heart has more gold then steel : O)

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Theodora Onken 19 April 2007

Brillant use of words, melvina! Loved it! Best wishes, Theo

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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