(88) You Made Me Happy Comments

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Lovely poem! Hoping that you are happy. Hugs, Dee

A great picture of love 's blindness. Top marks. Patrick

David this is a sweet romantic piece with shining eyes. It has effortless rhythmic cadences and a light-hearted bouncy feel - 'I floated helium hearted homeward'. Memories of adolescence methinks.... love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Oh how this feeling would last! ! The world would stop nothing would get done! ! Hey I liked this poem Thank you Karen

A poem to remind lovers of that first joy and why it doesn't have to end (put each other first; happiness ensues) ... The all-encompassing spirit of love lives in this piece (wonderful phrasing throughout, such as 'I've seen you come, I've watched you go') . Thanks for this, Esther: ]

Vapid it ain't. Expressive of that first flush it is, inspiringly so. Fine write to which we can all (iof we are lucky) relate - the mark of a good piece. t x

This is lovely David..... I can see you almost skipping home after accompanying this lady! A warming read... HG: -) xx

Most innovative & witty work, indeed, David....Good Rhythm....Smooth fluxion...fine crafting''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''{ F j R }