(879) Fear Me-Stay Alive Comments

MS.GERMAIN, YOUR POEM HAS OPEN MY EYES UP TO REALIZE THAT EVERYONE CAN BECOME A STATISTIC WHEN IT COMES TO CARELESSNESS. I'LL TRY TO BE A WHOLE LOT MORE CAREFULL FROM DAY TO DAY FROM NOW ON.

it never fails to Amaze me, how many Subjects get Covered by such great poems like this... melvina 10

Melvina, beautifully worded work that emphasizes just how dangerous the world out there can be to the careless. As things get bigger you need to be fully concentrating on what you. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece of fine structure. David

well done Melvina, a fine penning on an old wives tale, yet that they be so big and so mean if you need help a friend they be.........

Powerful write Melvina! Well done! ..............................Diane

This is certainly well written Melvina. So true also! A lesson for all Karen x